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G、T一同备考依然拿下113、 331,托福作文满分,(12)

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  ⑦collocations。搭配真的很主要,它让稀少平常的陈说句也能有光荣。In my opinion, this proposal will not benefit businesses and educational institutions (benefit A & B), as leaders in these fields need many years to build their reputation and earn trust from the stakeholders.

  这是一个十分平庸的句子,然则假设考场中写出大年夜局部都是如许的,而不是通篇It is adj to do的结构,我想分数不至于太低吧。建议过一遍短语,然后找一些自己会用的,重复无看法去用,写个两三遍就成习惯了。

  每团体的习用短语都纷歧样。我团体习惯用的都是一些很复杂的结构,只是我经常会经过语料库检查我的动宾搭配可否是准确的。以下举例一段(issue 4),异样的,未必是最好的写法。

  To the contrary, some may disagree and argue that scandals are still useful in creating pressure to push the reform.This does sound tempting and plausiblegiven the fact that there are existing evidence like Watershed Scandal and Snowden Scandal. Both of the two carried out some social change: Nixon was forced to step downfor his wiretapping his opponent, and Snowden created a strong appeal among the citizens to stop the US government from prying into our daily telephone conversation.However, despite their superficial success, we should also notice that scandal usually survive for such a short period that little meaningful progress can be made out of it. In the Watergate case, no political acts were carried out and the nature of politicians remained crafty and unsupervised since not prevention was made. Likewise, in the Snowden Scandal, three months later less than half of the original public still paid attention to whether the government has stopped the PRIXM program or not. …..

  最后关于写句子灌水。请有水平地灌水,我认为靠扩大年夜“我认为”的词数来加字数很地痞,也不流畅。

  北美范文里的To support this point we need to look no further than…. /To bolster my argument, we need to look no further on /To the refute argument, we need to look no further on,我果断不用。

  哪怕你用个It is important to bear in mind that,读起来都比那些明明用for example就可以替换了的灌水句子要很多多少了吧。

  其余,其实很多时分“正着说完反着说,反着说完合着说”就可以扩大年夜很多字数了呢。同时加上准确的连接词和共享的中间词(比如三个句子都提到了earn trust),就会让人认为很连接。

  3 关于素材积累

  需求积累政治类/企业类/艺术类/黉舍类的素材。基本上各找两个然后测验对着往上套就成。

  Gre填空有时分都是很好的素材起源。我自己政治类准备的素材是各类总统和毛泽东,企业类准备的素材是facebook,三鹿奶粉和BP原油公司;

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